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©2009 *gabbyd70
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Artist's Comments

~Dumbledore and Snape~
I love these books and movies :meow:

For this drawing I used:
:bulletred: 9” x 12” Canson Vellum paper
:bulletred: 0.3 3H, 0.5 4B, and 0.7 2H mechanical pencils
:bulletred: tissues, q-tips, & stumps
:bulletred: white gel pen
:bulletred: Photo reference


Characters © J.K. Rowling

Critiques


:iconduststorm10:
First off, I'd like to say that this looks great! The contrast is flawless, the composition is amazing, and the expressions are perfect. I must have stared at this for 10 minutes before thinking of anything to write about it!

There were two main things that stand out to me that could be improved. Dumbledore's hair, the loose strands behind him, are too hard, in my opinion. A softer eraser could be used to make them look less like lines and more like light hitting them--it would have a fuzzier look and look more realistic and slightly mystical (which is appropriate here. ;) )

The other thing is the wrinkles around Dumbledore's eyes, they appear to me to be, once again, too hard. A little bit of added darkness VERY slightly emanating from them might help soften it. Same goes with the shadow inside his nostril.

But again, these are only very small. This piece is beautiful, and I applaud your talent! :clap:
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:icondragonink7:
This is awesome!!

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Don't take anything personally!
:iconxexus:
I love the cropping and you did a great job rendering, very good work ^^
:iconpipalior:
ha wow amazingness!!!!

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:iconthealmightymoi:
Woah... That's literally all I habve to say. This is too good for words.

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"Why? Did you fall out of someone's arse?"
:iconwilnius:
amazing nothng short of amazing, i'm truely stunned

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live each day like it was your last
:iconlaublack:
OH god!! so amazing!

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:iconanimus3:
:iconffffplz:
>8€
FFFF!
SOOO awesome!
Like a b/w photo!

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Nuts don't go in my hole...>w>

Oh please. You look like a hemophiliac's attempt at forming a scab.

...I have art in my gallery, you know that, right?
:iconcsnyder:
amazing depth and detail:hug:
:iconinspired-impressions:
The detail is amazing! I love the emotion you've capture on their faces. Faved. :D

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon PowerShot SD800 IS
1/159 second
F/2.8
5 mm
May 1, 2009, 3:57:25 AM

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